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This site is a place where someone will gladly help you improve your writing skills. We all have flaws and even though some of us would rather not admit it, we do need help. I, Kaylen Phary, also known as Kay am more then willing to help you out. Though I am not the best writing in the world, I am quite good when it comes to helping others improve.

Please, feel free to make your way around the site to learn more. I hope that you enjoy your stay. If you have any questions at all, feel free to either contact me, or go over to the FAQ.

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2.04.06.09.12:04.2
Written by Kay-chan at April 14, 2009 @ 9:14:30 pm, while having 0 people who care
I'm trying to win a .info domain name. Nothing too special, but I like it. Then at least I don't have to worry about buying one of my own or something.
Now, to win I have to write a well written review as well as a reason why I should win. Well, in all honesty I think it's up to the people at Fading Kiss to decide why I should win. After all they are the ones who are giving out the free domain name. :) So, let's go with that since I can't offer a real well read reason why I should win. I'll leave the choice to them, is my site worth buying or giving a domain to or not. I'd like to believe it is.
The next was to review their site. I suppose this is the easy part? lol Sorry about it being a bit long. Writing things with detail is a bit of a habit.

First of all, I think the layout is very nice. It's not blinding on the eyes and that's always a plus. Another plus is the fact that the layout works in all browsers though I must add it does take an extra moment or two in Avant browser.
As I look over the site I've found one problem. According to the Welcome Fading Kiss offers sub-hosting yet no where on the site do I see anything else about said hosting. The only place I see sub hosting is if one buys or has domain hosting. This makes the welcome seem misleading. Naturally, one would assume sub-hosting comes with domain hosting as it does with many other hosts. I think this should be made more clear or an explanation given.

I move on to the policies section where I found the headers to be a little messed up. Example,

Ordering:
Please fill up the domain order form to avail one hosting plan. As soon as I receive your mail, I will ask you to pay your bill. I will neglect your request if you are not going to pay within one week. You can choose if you want to pay monthly or yearly.
Payment:

I am accepting payments thru paypal and bankwire. My paypal id is diannekarolpalma@yahoo.com. You can send payments at anytime you want before the expiration date of your domain hosting plan. I will send you an email within 1 week if your plan is about to expire. If you are not able to pay your bill the day after it expires, your account will be suspended. But if 10 days passed and you still haven’t pay your bill, your account will be terminated without prior notice.

In front of the word 'ordering' there is an unneeded and rather odd looking extra space. Then the payment header is right under the ordering information though from my understanding it should be directly about the payment explanation with the extra space between the word 'payment' and the ordering explanation. Fading Kiss seems to have this problem throughout the page.
Something else I've noticed is many misspelled words. For example the word' thru' is used instead of the word 'through'. I think the site would look better if the proper word was used and spelled out as such. Not everyone knows what 'thru' means and there is no dictionary (unless you know what you're looking for) that has such a word. Simple put, using misspelled words or short terms like that will confuse people. Teenagers in many cases will simply leave and go find someone else instead of ask or in some cases they'll pretend that they know what said words means and in some cases this could mess up the meaning of a phrase. So remember, spelling does count especially when running a business. You want to look professional, bad spelling takes away from your site.

In addition, I notice that there is no place where I can view already hosted sites. I feel that I should be allowed to see what kind of sites Fading Kiss is hosting. If I am to join, should I not be allowed to see who my 'sibling' hostees are? I believe there should be a page or navigation space where they are listed with their links.

I also must bring up the lack of support. You have many hosting plans yet no support or explanation to go with it. The support page is merely a form to send a message with no FAQ, or explanation what so ever. Things like, CPanel, Fantastico, Installatron, Add on/Parked Domains, Disk Space, Bandwidth, etc are not explained. People who are new to hosting or have very little experience may not know what all of this is. This should be explained on the page with the package or on the support page with the FAQs (Frequently Asked Questions). This way people won't get confused.

Finally, I think the explanations or details of the hosting plans should be better explained. Otherwise Fading Kiss is very good and seems like a very good place to go. :) After all, I'm interested aren't I? lol Over all, I'd give Fading Kiss a four (4) our of five (5) rating which is pretty high on my scale.
Good luck with the site! :D

So, there is my lovely review. I hope it fits the part. I tried not to make it too long and directly to the point which I found was a little more difficult then I had originally imagined. Still, I don't think it came out too badly.
Well, I do hope that it is to Fading Kiss's liking.
In closing I must add that links to Fading Kiss and DianneKarol are at the bottom of the main content along with the other advertisements. I hope that this is okay.
Thank you very much for reading,

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5.03.19.09.3:57.1
Written by Kay-chan at April 14, 2009 @ 9:12:48 pm, while having 0 people who care
Yeah, I'm up early again. Studying and work has got my sleep schedule a mess. No surprise there though I suppose. I realize that I still need to get some reviews done and I'm ashamed to say that for most, I haven't even started. I suppose you can say that I'm deeply disappointed in myself. Since everything is piling up like this I'm putting a hold on all further reviews. Please do not send anymore review requests until further notice. I'm gonna try and catch up on my work Friday and over the weekend.
I also have a court date Monday, so I may or may not be on. I'm not sure how long I'll be there or what so everything's kinda hanging in the air. Still, things should slow down come Tuesday or so. I'm hoping anyways.
I'll try and get to work as soon as possible! Sorry for the trouble, dears!

Again, as requested a client is in a contest to win a domain name. To help her win please click this link and ask your friends to do the same for her. So, please be so kind as to ask your friends to do the same.
Thanks so much, :)

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2.03.09.09.9:22.2
Written by Kay-chan at April 14, 2009 @ 9:11:41 pm, while having 0 people who care
As requested a client is in a contest to win a domain name. To help her win please click this link and ask your friends to do the same for her. Please be so kind as to ask your friends to do the same. Thanks so much, :)
Next in life, I'm working on some more reviews. No real surprise there I suppose. Currently in the works is 'Not so Happy Days', 'Hearts of Life', 'My Little Prince', and 'Angel of Mine'. I'm also doing some additional work and help with 'Magalainia' to help out a client.
I may also be getting a new client. That'll be interesting. This girl's stories are of high interest to me so I'd be excited to be working with her.
My own stories like '123 Love' are also being worked on during my spare time. I'm hoping to finish some of them soon. Especially the fanfictions of course. I'm not sure if I'll end up posting them up here though. I will have to see. What do you all think?

Questions!

{1} Do you think I should post my stories (original and fanfiction) up here on the site as I finish them? Or should I only post them on FanFiction.net and FictionPress?
{2} How many of you are actually going to read any of my writings? I'm simply curious, if you don't that's fine. :)
{3} Have you read the new requirements as well as the new terms and conditions?

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7.03.07.09.7:29.2
Written by Kay-chan at April 14, 2009 @ 9:10:49 pm, while having 0 people who care
I've finished the site for the most part. There are still some pages and things I'd like to edit, but for now they'll have to wait. I'm happy with the site though and the new layout which looks quite nice if I do say so myself. Haha,
Anyways, take a look around the site and let me know what you think. Also, clients! Take a note to the edit in the rules!

Thanks for reading!

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5.03.05.09.2:54.2
Written by Kay-chan at April 14, 2009 @ 9:09:38 pm, while having 0 people who care
I've moved most of the files over and I'm working with this layout. It's fun to try new things by new people don't you agree? Haha, I got this layout from a very very nice website, 'Autumn Sunsets' I believe. A client recommended the site. I'll definitely be going back to said site for future layouts.
All in all, I should have the site completely back up within a few days give or take a bit of time. I do though, hope to have the site up by Monday. Please let me know if you find any problems or errors.
Thanks so much,

I have moved the site and most of the files. As of this time I'm currently working to get the site back in order. With the move and all many files have become disorganized. The site should be back up to par within a few days.

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