First of all, I think the layout is very nice. It's not blinding on the eyes and that's always a plus. Another plus is the fact that the layout works in all browsers though I must add it does take an extra moment or two in Avant browser.
As I look over the site I've found one problem. According to the Welcome Fading Kiss offers sub-hosting yet no where on the site do I see anything else about said hosting. The only place I see sub hosting is if one buys or has domain hosting. This makes the welcome seem misleading. Naturally, one would assume sub-hosting comes with domain hosting as it does with many other hosts. I think this should be made more clear or an explanation given.
I move on to the policies section where I found the headers to be a little messed up. Example,
Ordering:
Please fill up the domain order form to avail one hosting plan. As soon as I receive your mail, I will ask you to pay your bill. I will neglect your request if you are not going to pay within one week. You can choose if you want to pay monthly or yearly.
Payment:
I am accepting payments thru paypal and bankwire. My paypal id is diannekarolpalma@yahoo.com. You can send payments at anytime you want before the expiration date of your domain hosting plan. I will send you an email within 1 week if your plan is about to expire. If you are not able to pay your bill the day after it expires, your account will be suspended. But if 10 days passed and you still haven’t pay your bill, your account will be terminated without prior notice.
In front of the word 'ordering' there is an unneeded and rather odd looking extra space. Then the payment header is right under the ordering information though from my understanding it should be directly about the payment explanation with the extra space between the word 'payment' and the ordering explanation. Fading Kiss seems to have this problem throughout the page.
Something else I've noticed is many misspelled words. For example the word' thru' is used instead of the word 'through'. I think the site would look better if the proper word was used and spelled out as such. Not everyone knows what 'thru' means and there is no dictionary (unless you know what you're looking for) that has such a word. Simple put, using misspelled words or short terms like that will confuse people. Teenagers in many cases will simply leave and go find someone else instead of ask or in some cases they'll pretend that they know what said words means and in some cases this could mess up the meaning of a phrase. So remember, spelling does count especially when running a business. You want to look professional, bad spelling takes away from your site.
In addition, I notice that there is no place where I can view already hosted sites. I feel that I should be allowed to see what kind of sites Fading Kiss is hosting. If I am to join, should I not be allowed to see who my 'sibling' hostees are? I believe there should be a page or navigation space where they are listed with their links.
I also must bring up the lack of support. You have many hosting plans yet no support or explanation to go with it. The support page is merely a form to send a message with no FAQ, or explanation what so ever. Things like, CPanel, Fantastico, Installatron, Add on/Parked Domains, Disk Space, Bandwidth, etc are not explained. People who are new to hosting or have very little experience may not know what all of this is. This should be explained on the page with the package or on the support page with the FAQs (Frequently Asked Questions). This way people won't get confused.
Finally, I think the explanations or details of the hosting plans should be better explained. Otherwise Fading Kiss is very good and seems like a very good place to go. :) After all, I'm interested aren't I? lol Over all, I'd give Fading Kiss a four (4) our of five (5) rating which is pretty high on my scale.
Good luck with the site! :D
So, there is my lovely review. I hope it fits the part. I tried not to make it too long and directly to the point which I found was a little more difficult then I had originally imagined. Still, I don't think it came out too badly.
Well, I do hope that it is to Fading Kiss's liking.
In closing I must add that links to Fading Kiss and DianneKarol are at the bottom of the main content along with the other advertisements. I hope that this is okay.
Thank you very much for reading,
Again, as requested a client is in a contest to win a domain name. To help her win please click this link and ask your friends to do the same for her. So, please be so kind as to ask your friends to do the same.
Thanks so much, :)
Questions!
{1} Do you think I should post my stories (original and fanfiction) up here on the site as I finish them? Or should I only post them on FanFiction.net and FictionPress?
{2} How many of you are actually going to read any of my writings? I'm simply curious, if you don't that's fine. :)
{3} Have you read the new requirements as well as the new terms and conditions?
Thanks for reading!
I have moved the site and most of the files. As of this time I'm currently working to get the site back in order. With the move and all many files have become disorganized. The site should be back up to par within a few days.
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